Wrecking Waves (2) [edit]
Melancholy waves I endure for the current state, buta past can not sigh on static shoresbecause the wrecking throb ispumping sorrow bloodthat feeds lachrymal eyesSorrow ocean is too vast to carry my...
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Doug,May the waves rock your boat gentlyand may the golden sun be shining on your shore.This poem has a pulse and it lives and breathes.Sarah
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The oceans are vast, a teardrop less than a pinprick in the universe, but still we fight against the undertow.
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Doug,I really like that last stanza.actually, I like the whole poembut did notice a change in the last stanza.Both versions are keepers!Sarah
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smzang wrote:Doug,May the waves rock your boat gentlyand may the golden sun be shining on your shore.This poem has a pulse and it lives and breathes.SarahThanks very much. I love your poetic...
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